You may have heard about the pumpkin who didn’t grow a mouth.
She lived in a creepy cave in the dark forest.
She was great at hunting, she only had one arm and never missed a deer.
But one day she missed a deer and she had never missed one before.
She was so mad that she dropped her gun and gave up.
Then she went to go find the deer she found it then she got her knife and cut it.
Monday 24 March 2014
You may have heard about the pumpkin who didn’t grow a mouth.
She lived in a creepy cave in the dark forest.
She was great at hunting, she only had one arm and never missed a deer.
But one day she missed a deer and she had never missed one before.
She was so mad that she dropped her gun and gave up.
Then she went to go find the deer she found it then she got her knife and cut it.
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Awesome work Keelyn keep it up my faviorite part was when you said then she went to find the deer she found it and then she got her knife and cut the deer open,i liked how you used capital letters and full stops and next time you should use some commas
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