Friday 28 March 2014

Tomato splat

Writing Task: Week 8
WALT: add adverbs to our verbs - Think of 5 verbs and adverbs to describe what is going on.
Recap on adjectives - think of 5 adjectives and nouns to describe what is in the picturetomato 2.jpgtomato festival.jpg





Verbs and Adverbs.
   1.joyfully throwing
    2.happily  
    3.safely covering
    4.catching
    5.dodging
Adjectives and Nouns.  
     1.red tomato people
     2.big red street
     3 huge big party
     4.
      5.          

it was a perfect day for the great event  i was just walking down the street with my friends Ella and Lily. we saw this big wall with a door in it i said to Ella and Lily thats a bit weird should we open it so i open it ahhhhhhhh i screamed i quickly shut the door was that blood or a big red  tomato fight. i think thats a tomato fight. lets go in. ohhh noooo a tomato is coming straight at me. i fainted i was in hospital  for 2 days then after that we went back there some people had gone because there was about 1000 people there when we first came here now there is about 100 people  yuck i think i just stood  in a puddle of tomatoes yup  i did .Ella lookout i quickly try and catch it  i close my eyes and hope that  i  can catch it did i catch it did i catch it. i squeezed my      hands tight hoping that  i catched it. yay i  catched it. i was covered in tomatoes it looked like i just got attacked by a monster. by keelyn.

 

2 comments:

  1. I like how u said huge big party.

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  2. I liked how used adjectives and I think you could put commas in there.

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