Thursday 30 July 2015

holidays are too short


                          
                                        Holidays are too short
Introduction
Don't you just love being able to wake up whenever you like and relax and take
your time and not worry about anything. That's why I deeply  think that we need to  add one extra week added  to our current holiday.
Firstly
The most important reason why I think holidays should be 3 weeks is that we can
visit our friends and family in other places and I love going to see family and friends.


Secondly
We need to have time to go somewhere in the holidays but we don't have enough time to if we did we could only stay for 3 nights and that's not a holiday to me.


Lastly
If you break a bone you would want to recover and rest in your bed but you would not have enough time. And you need a good sleep before school.

That's why I think that we need one extra week of our holidays,as i've stated my reasons above hopefully you can think about it.



3 comments:

  1. i love how your intro states your viewpoint clearly but next time try to include your main point and supporting detail
    ;] ;] :)

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    1. ok thank you for your feedback brody :] :] :]

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  2. i love how your intro states your viewpoint clearly but next time try to include your main point and supporting detail
    ;] ;] :)

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