I am a year 5 student at David St School in Morrinsville, New zealand
Nice video Keelyn. I liked your intro. Next time maybe speak a little slower. Danielle Rm 4
Cool Keelyn I agree with Danielle I like your introduction but next time you could talk a little bit louder and slower.
Great work Dlyan and Keelyn I like that video but at the star you should add a capital letter and a full stop.
Great work keelyn I loved it but next time could you speak louder and I can't wait for you next video.
Nice video Keelyn. I liked your intro. Next time maybe speak a little slower. Danielle Rm 4
ReplyDeleteCool Keelyn I agree with Danielle I like your introduction but next time you could talk a little bit louder and slower.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Dlyan and Keelyn I like that video but at the star you should add a capital letter and a full stop.
ReplyDeleteGreat work keelyn I loved it but next time could you speak louder and I can't wait for you next video.
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